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Brandon's feedback to marrisa

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I'm putting my feedback here because I'm pretty badass, simple as that. This paper's hot. I have to say its hard to be funny on paper, but you definitely nailed it. Way to keep the reader interested! Really I'm kinda upset I can't find anything wrong... :( I love bashing papers but I just can't spot anything. The thesis is there, there's structure, definitely content, your personality, a dynamic closing yet heartfelt... Must say I'm pretty jealous.

GRAND TOTAL: (100/100)

Rhetorical Knowledge(25/25)

Wow, what a good paper. Really your major must be journalism because you really can transform a topic into something worth reading. Tone, purpose, responding to different audiences, everything, flawless.

Critical Thinking, Writing, and Reading(25/25)

This paper incorporated so much of what we've learned in this class. All the readings, the multi-media was placed in this paper effortlessly. You've explained sustainability in the books we've studied and contrasted that to sustainability in your life. Awesome job integrating ideas!

Process (25/25)

You've participated in peer edits, no revisions have been made on your paper, but I honestly don't see how you can make it better.

Knowledge of Conventions(25/25)

The structure of your paper is great. I knew what the paper was about early in the paper! You kept it interesting and added a lot of "you", which I really liked. Awesome job!

-Brandon