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Deeroo Causal grading

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Patrick Carew-

I found your paper very interesting and well thought out. The shift from blaming the greedy to just blaming everyone is a reasonable assertion considering everyone that choose to be in a market has an affect on the market. The paper was also very easy to follow with very few mistakes. You also ruled out some counter argument by starting your paper off with the main counter argument. Overall a good paper.

Rhetorical Knowledge (5) Critical Thinking (5) Writing and reading (5) Process (5) Knowledge of Conventions (5) Grand Total (25/25)

Danny-

I found your paper to play a good devils advocate to the popular reasoning of environmentalism and also to hold some water. The idea that the best way for us to take care of the environment is to take us out of it, is crazy. We should be allowed to hunt with restraint and the ecosystem will actually be as well off as it was before the hunting took place. I think it is also a very well formated paper with the sections as opposed to just one long section. The format helped make the paper go by faster and sink in more. Overall good work.

Rhetorical Knowledge (5) Critical Thinking (5) Writing and reading (5) Process (5) Knowledge of Conventions (5) Grand Total (25/25)