This essay is well written. I can tell that she was well informed of the issue she was discussing. The only problem is that some parts are a little unclear. The organization of the essay is key in understanding the topic of sustainable energy. I give this essay an A, because even though there are some unclear spots, the essay in general is informative, and the audience would be able to understand what she is talking about.
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