Savannah's essay was very informative and detailed. Her transitions were not as smooth as I expected, but over all it is a great essay. I would only suggest that she make her transitions smoother. Other than that, it was an amazing essay and I learned a lot from it. The fact that she described the different types of energy for each generation showed that she did her research. I also enjoyed the agriculture part of her sustainability essay. I give her essay an A.
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