What is your thesis?

My thesis is "What is sustainability?'

How did this particular argument come about?

My argument developed over time. My original argument was going to be how sustainability relates to progress throughout human history and how it has brought us to where we are today. I didn't get very far when even I lost interest in my own topic. I decide to keep the same premiss of something that has been around as long as humans have been. I chose to write about the sustainability of music, mainly because it interested me, and I also knew a little about the history of music.

Who's your audience and what, techniques do you use to make your writing speak to their concerns and interests?

My audience is everybody who likes any kind of music. I think I spoke to everyone when I went through the different time periods of music and how they developed through their life span.

Upon reviewing your completed composition (and process), what aspect of your work (or it's process) most surprised you?

What most surprised me was, when you look back in time, how much music has influenced peoples attitude toward everything. Music is everywhere and I think it plays a big part in culture and everyones day to day life.

Did you learn anything new while growing your composition? Explain.

I wrote most of the paper on knowledge I already had, but I researched more on the topic of pre historic music and how early man made music by trying to mimic the sounds of nature. I thought that was very interesting.

When you use secondary sources, do those sources contribute to ethos, logos, or pathos appeals?

Sure do.

When considering peer feedback as you revised your rough draft, which advice/suggestion/question/criticism/edit was most useful/helpful?

All of it was. People just told me a few things to correct, or delete.It also made me realize that I probably need to change my topic, which I did.

On your final version, where would you like to see the most feedback and attention from graders?

I really am just very curious to who found my paper interesting.

1. reflection piece: reflect on peer revisions/suggestions/feedback you received on your paper: 1 paragraph

Reflection

2. Final Draft

3. all peer feedback work performed (perform at least 3 peer reviews) Peer Reviews

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4. compose a graphical representation of your writing process. You can draw/paint/color and then scan, or you can use the graphic image manipulation program of your choosing.

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