Peer Grading

The paper got my attention and I would defiantly read it again, unfortunately the paper is not complete. The essay contains a topic, symbolism of tattoos, but it lacks any true support for this topic. She does explain many reason why a person may get tattoos, but besides that the essay is very repetitive in its reasoning. If the paper was complete, maybe it would have structure but as it stands now it is a mass of word surrounding an idea. This would definitely not be acknowledged by a recognizable group because of it lacking in most aspects. This paper is simply incomplete and if finished would fulfill most of the requirements splendidly. I would give Kristin a 17 out of 25 because she has her idea and on opening paragraph but is missing the rest of the paper (I am being nice). -Zach