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yo i graded you

Page history last edited by PBworks 15 years, 6 months ago

i honestly dont know where to begin. i guess i could go over everything that i loved but that would be me just copy and pasting your whole essay, your writng style is awesome! i feel a kinship with you and your beliefs and thoughts, if i absolutely had to say anything bad about your essay is that it ends abrubtly i think you could say more ALOT more! i feel like i have written and said your words too! i dont know what your major is but you should definitely write. write anything. i think your thoughts flowed and connected and informed and explained beautifully. i actually read the whole thing and i would read it again, if i had a number scale, sayyy like 20 points being the max, i'd give you 19/20

the links were awesome, its great that you pulled outside sources into your paper and made connections with unrelated things, you made them related :)

you have great forms of ethos, pathos, and lagos and its my favorite essay so far

i really really really liked it! i cant say that enough

i really like the way you think and express yourself

you see whats in the gutter and your not changed or swayed by the pressure of politics and traditions.